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Doctor Who - Tom Baker
Romana I - Mary Tamm
K-9 (voice) - John Leeson
The Ribos Operation
And this is what happens when the Time Lords are no longer an
external, super-powerful plot effect; you need a new external,
super-powerful plot effect. You invent the Guardians.
Graham Williams had been determined to tell a story that spread over
more than one set of episodes, in particular disliking the coincidence
that each TARDIS arrival should happen to be when an adventure's
happening, and for his second series he had time to commission scripts
with a story arc in mind.
For this first story, he sensibly brought back Robert Holmes, who
pulls it off quite nicely; for a story that introduces the Most Epic
Quest EVAR, he sensibly scales everything right down. Starting with
one of his trademark double acts, and going on with a second, this is
a caper story of the sort we haven't often seen on the show:
tranquilising the beast, cutting the glass, hiding behind pillars, and
so on, while also running a real-estate scam. The Giordano-Bruno-clone
seems a bit like padding, but it's a nice character moment for
Unstoffe. This is what you do when you don't have a big budget: you
don't scrape the money thinly over a huge story, you spread it thickly
on a small one.
This is definitely a return to form for the show; George
Spenton-Forster, who'd previously directed Image of the Fendahl
making the best of a poor script, did a fine job with a better one
here. Graham Williams was allowed by the Head of Drama to tone down
the jokiness that he felt had been forced on him in series 15. The
Shrivenzales aren't ideal, and the Seeker is a bit of a misstep, but
overall this story not only is visually impressive but makes some degree
of sense.
These days it's hard to see Garron as being played by anyone other
than Stephen Fry, but Iain Cuthbertson's rather better at the whole
acting thing. Paul Seed as the Graff does a fine if stagey job of
showing a gradual descent into raving madness. Apart from Binro and
the Seeker, and some moments from the Graff, everyone keeps things
underplayed here (even Baker!), and the story's much better for it.
The organ music is distracting, as it was in The Invasion of Time,
but fortunately we don't get too much of it, and Dudley Simpson
otherwise does a good job.
Mary Tamm's eyebrows are also rather distracting, but she comes off
very well apart from that. Tom Baker objected to her white dress,
probably for lack of anything else to object to. I note with interest
that this was the last time in the original show that a new companion
came in with a new series.
Meanwhile we see yet again that K-9 can't fit through the TARDIS door,
and all it really gets used for is a mobile weapon. Ah well. At least
it's got a bit quieter with the new prop.
The Pirate Planet
Ah, yes, "the Douglas Adams story". Adams had contracted to write it
after selling the first series of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the
Galaxy, but got bogged down in writing the unexpected second series
and so delivered this script in a very late and confused state. (He
was pretty good at failing to keep his commitments even when he
didn't have something else more fun to do.) Anthony Read had to
perform a very heavy editing job, in particular trying to tone down
the original plot's complexity (there's still enough stuff going on
here for at least two normal Who stories, maybe three) and its
humorous content.
But at first there are jokes everywhere, so much so that even Tom
Baker chooses to play it seriously in episode one (though not for a
moment afterwards). The story does seem a bit too pleased with itself,
and takes a fair old while to get going; most of the first episode
seems to mark time.
It also a remarkably cheap story in places; when a crowd of cheering
citizens is just eight people, even the best-dressed studio has a
tendency to look a bit empty. Berkeley Nuclear Power Station does a
decent job as the engine room; other sets and locations get the job
done without impressing. The air-car is all too obviously a lightly
hacked-about boat, while the infamous Avitron is fine when we don't
see what it does but entirely silly as it craps yellow VFX clouds
around the room during the "climactic" fight with K-9. (And the red
VFX smears for the gunfights just don't work at all. Having no effect
would have been much better.)
The cast, too, mostly seems to be here to get the job done rather than
to impress; Mary Tamm's grown into the part though she's in the
background a lot of the time, and her scenes with Baker are excellent,
but otherwise everyone's pretty much doing what they always do (Baker
after part one, except for a little ragey monologue to the Captain
which for me doesn't convince even at all) or playing a monotype that
hopes one day to grow up and become a stereotype (everyone else).
Shouty captain, cringing mate, bland then evil nurse, blander natives,
ho hum. The idea that the shouty captain role is a deliberate
attempt to deceive the Queen is all very well, but we're only told
about this, never shown it. (And there's only one Brian Blessed.)
There are some obvious Adams lines, such as Baker's monologue to the
guards towards the end of part two, and it's pleasing to see a real
cave again after the failure of Underworld. But all too much of this
story is spent wandering around the landscape, or chatting in aircars
(inserted specifically so that Adams could avoid scenes of walking
down corridors), or being captured and escaping again; things only
really pick up in the last episode and a half. Even there there are
flaws: at first interfering with the time dams would destroy the
entire planet, but then a little later simply blowing them up is just
fine. The technobabble "solution" to the problem of the balanced
planets brings my frustration with the "throw nonsense words at it"
approach to everything to a climax.
This feels like a story that was too heavily edited, then not read
through for consistency afterwards. If that couldn't be done, it
should at least have had a director who could see what worked well on
screen and what didn't, and who could get good performances out of the
actors. If it had had both, it could have been brilliant; as it is,
everything here has been painted in a thick coat of meh. There are
occasional good bits, but as a story I have to call it a failure.
It's disappointing because this is one I very much enjoyed first time
round, aged about nine. Good thing I've grown up a bit, really.
The Stones of Blood
David Fisher was an experienced screenwriter, but new to Doctor Who.
His first outing works really rather well, as everything fits
together: ploy, narrative, acting, direction (by Darrol Blake, who'd
worked mostly for ITV and whose sole connection with the show this
was). The only real difficulty is in working out what Cessair of
Diplos' actual plan was. What would she have done if the Doctor
hadn't come along and caused confusion?
There's something of a Hammer feel to the first parts, giving me at
least lots of flashbacks to The Daemons, The Masque of Mandragora
and Image of the Fendahl; it's a plot that would work better with
the Master in it, really. Or if Vivien Fay's name were just a bit
more subtle, perhaps. The second half is a wrenching change of pace,
but for me it works quite well, reminding us that this is after all
a science fiction show even if some of the humour gets a bit broad.
Blake often has to resort to tricky camera-work; it's clear that K9
really can't manage any sort of rough ground (planks were laid for the
low shots of it crossing open country), and that the Ogri costumes are
difficult to fit through doors and archways (though I'm sure the
original conception, as humanoid rock-creatures, would have been
worse). Visual effects are patchy; there's some very bad CSO wobble
when Romana's hanging on the cliff, there are very primitive computer
graphics (done on a PET, perhaps?), but the Megara are rather
pleasing.
Vivien Fay could have been played by Honor Blackman, but she turned
down the part because it wasn't interesting enough. Shame. Susan Engel
does all right, but her underplaying in the early episodes is better
than her overplaying towards the end. Beatrix Lehmann as Professor
Rutherford is very fine, though there's something off about the timing
of her line delivery in her first scenes; she did die only a few
months after filming, and may not have been on top form.
Baker and Tamm are on the ball and having fun, even if Romana does get
a bit screamy at times. Still, having two other strong female
characters helps the story along.
This was the hundredth story.
The Androids of Tara
David Fisher's second story (it would have been the fifth of the
series, but production concerns pushed The Power of Kroll back), and
another decent production overall, even if Fisher does blatantly steal
from The Prisoner of Zenda. It's good to come to a smaller scale
from some of the huge events we've been seeing until now; the only
thing at stake here is the rulership of a single planet (and this
story's segment of the Key to Time is found in the first
half-episode). Still, for all the story could have been told in
sterile corridors, there's a gorgeous visual texture here; clearly
someone had lots of fun raiding the vaguely-historical costumes
cupboard.
Romana's really rather excellent first outfit was designed by Mary
Tamm herself, after the original proved impractical. Alas, Romana is
desperately damselled here, being carried off multiple times by the
Count at the drop of a sword-point. Meanwhile the Doctor starts and
ends this story being stubborn and, frankly, stupid (it's not as
though any of the previous three segments had been lying around
unguarded). The rest of the time he's in full comedy mode, and it
works well enough to take us along for the ride, though it does mean
that the Good Prince has very little to do (though not as little as
the real princess).
There's more good production in Madame Lamia's workshop, a pleasing
combination of various ages of technology. The other interior scenes
are more period, and less interesting.
Really, the Count ought to kill the Prince at the end of part one
(then take the throne when it's offered to him, when the Prince
doesn't turn up). It's only later that the Prince's continued life is
at all useful to him. But it's that sort of story, and he's that sort
of villain. Indeed, I rather suspect that Alan Rickman in Robin Hood,
Prince of Thieves may have based his performance on Peter Jeffrey as
the Count here.
Alas, while there's lots of fun here, there's also lots of runaround,
and the last episode in particular tends to drag; when the King
explains the Count's plan to Romana right before the Count explains it
much more amusingly to the Archimandrite, the whole business feels
like padding, and the very slow start to the climactic sword-fight
doesn't help. (Yeah, we've seen The Sea Devils.) It's up to the
Count to salvage things whenever Baker and Tamm are off screen, and
mostly he does.
The Power of Kroll
Every series has to have a weakest story. It's a bit surprising when
it's written by Robert Holmes, though. It's not that it's offensive,
for the most part; it's just that there's nothing much to it, a
succession of captures and escapes and set-pieces. Not even a standard
Holmes comic banter sequence between a couple of minor characters (by
request of the script editor, who also asked for the biggest monster
ever). To be fair to him, Holmes realised that there were problems; he
left the show after this with the intention of not returning.
The "natives" really are a very blunt narrative instrument — as indeed
are the "colonists". Both are practically the same people as in The
Mutants (only without the clever ideas), similarly there to show that
the Noble Savages are Right (if not in their religion, at least in
their wish to be left in peace) but simple, and the others are Wrong.
(This was pretty much the tenor of standard history in the UK in the
late 1970s as far as I could tell.)
It's odd that the wig for Ranquin, the leader of the swampies, should
so very obviously have been made by a process different from that used
on all the others. It's a darker green woollen cap sort of affair with
a distinctly different texture. His face is shinier and darker too.
Also, if you can't afford proper water effects, putting a model in a
tank really doesn't cut it; water ripples don't scale smoothly. Kroll
itself is not as bad as it might be, but never gives the impression of
being a quarter of a mile across; the size of a house, at most. Sets
are either basic (the swampies' village and temple) or boring (the
refinery).
John Leeson appears on screen, for once, as the most techie of the
colonists. (The original actor dropped out, and Leeson was available.)
The only really memorable performances are from Philip Madoc and John
Abineri, both of whom were old hands on the programme; apart from
that, we have lots of Baker clowning, and yet again Romana's relegated
to a passive role.
Better actors might have compensated for the story, which always feels
stretched a bit thin; the long repeated sections at the starts of
episodes don't help, and the extra peril of the automatic launch at
the end of the final episode seems even more pasted on than most
padding. Nothing ever quite fits together. Direction by Norman Stewart
is lifeless at best (he'd also made the previous series'
Underworld). At least, unlike the previous story, the segment is a
key (sorry) part of the plot.
There were all sorts of ructions during production: Graham Williams
was ill and unable to work, Anthony Read was leaving to pursue a
career as a novelist, and Mary Tamm was havering because she was
dissatisfied with the way Romana had after a promising start become
just another screamer; meanwhile Tom Baker demanded vastly more
creative control, and threatened to resign just as the Head of Drama
was considering firing him.
(Blake's 7 began its second series. It continued to run after the
end of this series of Doctor Who. Battlestar Galactica began its
run in the USA; I don't know when it was first shown in the UK.)
The Armageddon Factor
Tom Baker was eventually called on his bluff and signed up for series
17, without any of his demands being met. John Leeson left. Mary Tamm
committed to leaving, and suggested to Lalla Ward that she apply for
the part; since Ward and Tom Baker were already striking sparks on the
set by this point, she agreed.
Written by Bob Baker and Dave Martin again. Hmm; not perhaps the team
I'd choose to end a series-long story arc. Though actually there's
some pretty good stuff here; it's individual episodes that sag
(particularly three, which is just a general runaround, five, the same
but introducing Drax, and the first half or so of six, which carries
on in the same vein). The end of part six was mostly put together by
Graham Williams and incoming script editor Douglas Adams (and the
change in authorship shows, as we see the casual attitude to absolute
power of the earlier story turn into a practically Genesis-esque
rejection of it).
Originally the Black Guardian wasn't to appear at all, which would
have been a bit of a let-down after all the foreshadowing we've had
during this series. The original ending had the Doctor simply deciding
that nobody could be trusted with all that power, and scattering the
segments, thus rendering the entire plot arc pointless. As it is, it's
still a fair old anticlimax; it was left to Terrance Dicks in the
novelisation to point out that the White Guardian would have had time
to complete the required adjustments to the universe while the Key was
sitting in the TARDIS. (Does it count as fanwank when the script hole
is being fixed in an official novelisation?) It certainly doesn't help
that Cyril Luckham wasn't available to play the White Guardian this
time.
Tone is all over the place; in the end, some of the highest peril we
get is when the helpless K9's on its way to be recycled. That's much
more nightmarish than any scene of torture, mind control or collapsing
ceilings. On the other hand, the time loop is well presented (even if
it's not clear quite how the boundary works), rather better than in
B&M's first Who script The Claws of Axos. There's sloppiness
elsewhere: Romana forgets that she has already been briefed on the
Guardians, while Merak knows far too much about both the TARDIS and
the Key.
Like most of the recent six-parters (this was in fact the last
six-part story broadcast, though it wasn't planned that way), this
one's broken up into sub-stories, this time three of them: the war on
Atrios and the Marshal; then Zeos, Mentalis (an excellent piece of
design) and the introduction of the Shadow; then the conclusion. That
breakdown shows how readily this could have been squashed down to
fewer parts, though, and the two filler episodes really do drag. There
are excellent bits (the telecast/hospital opener), and great ideas
(the final segment as a living person), but also some terrible ones
(K9 making modem noises at a door; Drax; the huge signal-blocking
"third planet" that's actually a small space station), and generally
the execution is poor.
While some might feel that the lack of model spaceships flying about
is a budgetary failure, I actually prefer the blips-on-a-scanner
approach that we get in the early episodes. The Marshal's ship is not
bad, but doesn't impress.
This is the first time we've seen anyone else who actually knows about
the Key to Time since the first episode of this series. The Shadow's a
fairly generic villain, in the end; his plots change shape as needed
(why didn't he keep Astra controlled from the beginning?) and he's
mostly there to cackle evilly, but William Squire does a decent job
from behind the mask with what he's been given. How much more
interesting if it had been the Master.
Mary Tamm spends this story in a deep-cut white dress that would have
done credit to Leela; on the rare occasions she has something to do,
she's excellent as always. John Woodvine plays The Marshal as a sort
of macho American war-film general, then shifts personality as he gets
new orders, and has an effective double act with Shapp (Davyd
Harries), though most of the humour's on Shapp's side. Merak is a bit
of a wimp, and to be honest the Princess Astra doesn't come over very
well either (even before she spends a lot of time manacled to a wall).
(It was during broadcast of this series that The Tomorrow People
came to an end, after six years. That wasn't bad going for TV SF, not
bad at all.)
Bob Baker and Dave Martin
In all, they wrote ten stories together, The Armageddon Factor being
their last (Bob Baker returned solo for The Nightmare of Eden in
series 17). Some were dire; some were decent; none was really
exceptionally good. They had a tendency, like Robert Holmes, to
introduce great big chunks of continuity which would then be forgotten
by the next writer (I'm thinking particularly of Omega). In general, I
think they were competent at coming up with good ideas, but poor at
actually writing the scripts to fit them together; and this may well
explain why some fans, raised on novelisations or memories of the
shows rather than videotape or DVD, remember them fondly. The ideas
are often great. It's the wallpaper-paste that's all they can come
up with to glue them together that fails when one watches the actual
show rather than remembering the highlights of it.
Romana I
In retrospect I've found Mary Tamm excellent as Romana, but for her
this is a series of two halves: in the first three stories she has
decently meaty roles, while in the second half she is far too often
just a damsel in distress, her rescue being one more plot coupon that
has to be clipped out to complete the set and let things move on. I
can quite understand why she decided to leave.
Overall impressions
This was the series when I became a committed fan of the show as
opposed to the novelisations. Watching it now, I cannot help but think
that the Key to Time sequence was a marginal failure: a good idea, an
interesting linkage that kept some coherence between the stories, but
let down by the resolution. And of course I'm rather less uncritical
than I was at age nine; Tom Baker can still carry me over gaps with
his mugging and playing the fool, but I notice the gaps much more than
I used to. Still, it's been a vast improvement on series 15.
Next series: Douglas Adams, Script Editor.
Favourite story of this series: The Ribos Operation, though Stones or
even Androids might have beaten it if I'd been in a different mood.
Departed companions to date, ranked by how much I like them:
- Zoe
- Barbara
- Liz Shaw
- Leela
- Romana I
- Sarah Jane Smith
- Susan
- Ian
- Steven
- Sara Kingdom
- Jo Grant
- Jamie
- Ben
- Polly
- Vicki
- Victoria
- Dodo
- Katarina
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