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Murder Crossed Her Mind, Stephen Spotswood 21 July 2026

2023 mystery, fourth in its series. Pentecost and Parker are engaged to look into the disappearance of an elderly woman with a photographic memory.

And it's still interesting, but… it felt like hard going. There are side issues which in a finer mystery would tie back into the primary case (e.g. the solution to B gives an insight that helps with A); but here they aren't, they're side stories which either peter out or serve as setup for an ongoing thread across future books. I know, I complain about mystery series in which each book seems like an episodic story and the big multi-book plot elements are dragged out, and one of these side stories does indeed advance things, but another one is essentially a distraction from the main narrative.

The solution to the main mystery is found entirely by chance, and I don't like that.

And then, once the main case is wrapped up, the book ends with a cliffhanger and to-be-continued. Which feels cheap, like the old end of season cliffhanger of a TV show so that the fans would whine if it wasn't renewed.

There's a lack of trust in both directions between Pentecost and Parker which might have sat better in the first book than in this one when they've been working together for a while. Neither of them really seems like a good fit for their personalities as previous books have established them. Only one other character has anything in the way of complexity, rather than uncomplicated good/bad, and that not much.

It's still competently written at the individual sentence level, but I found it hard to love, not least because it felt so padded (though it's not vastly longer than previous volumes). As I write, there's been one more book published, and I'll probably read that, but if it's on a par with this I doubt I'll remember to come back later and look for more.

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